Black Poetry : Exposed !

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Jan 20, 2004.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Painful memories forgotten...
    Exposed !
    Emotions never surfaced...
    Exposed !
    Anger never released...
    Exposed !
    Tears never cried...
    Exposed !
    Sadness never captured...
    Exposed !
    Paths that should not have been taken...
    Exposed !
    Dreams that lay dying...
    Exposed !
    The strength to confront the past...
    Exposed !
    The courage to cement the future
    Exposed !
    Knowing nothing was in vain
    Exposed !
     
  2. SPIRITNORTH

    SPIRITNORTH Banned MEMBER

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    this is sooo good, very well penned, im feeling this one, very true.
     
  3. true love

    true love Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Felling you on this! I loved the way you wrote it, much love to you!
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    tyte drop love the way it was done
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yep this was Tight...
    i like..







    Keep writting..


    Love L
     
  6. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks everyone
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Liked the way the poem flowed on to a positive note, despite the past. Very nice.
     
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