Black Poetry : **Expose**

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Elixir, Aug 20, 2001.

  1. Elixir

    Elixir New Member MEMBER

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    L!V!T!

    you ain't hardly no prize, baby
    to be put away
    on some shelf for later
    you know?
    very, truly, really, deeply
    you are mine in ways that no other woman
    has a chance in hell of knowing
    this **** is so mother****in deep
    it can't be justified by no
    simple *** love poem
    triflin words on splittered down trees
    **** all that
    my love
    can't be
    wont be
    refuses to be
    quantified by home cooked meals
    and 15 minute tumbles in the sack
    because,
    there ain't a damned thing unique about ****in'
    what is notable
    what deserves distinction
    is the passion
    that is us
    feverish, coarse, searing raw and unrefined
    without containment, or fetters
    better left unchecked
    because i'll be *********
    if i try
    to put a leash on
    you
    © 2001 Elizabeth M. Quinn



    ** i love you, yuckie
     
  2. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes the realness
    just cain't be defined/
    confined as you have
    adequately shown in this
    piece...
    -7:spinstar:
     
  3. Maggie

    Maggie Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh yeah, sis

    yeahyeahyeah!

    Maggie
     
  4. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Elixir,

    Spittin' flame for Viti like that huh?

    Nice!

    Peace
    GQ