Black Poetry : Explosion!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PositiveMindset, Nov 26, 2002.

  1. PositiveMindset

    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm tired of having to choose
    Because it seems that my choices always make me lose.
    Either I can stay where I am or I can leave,
    Either I can remain truthful or I can deceive.
    I'm tired of hearing people tell me to pray
    When I've consistently prayed every day.
    But to no avail.
    I just want to know who it is that's making me fail.
    I do all that I can and I try to do my hardest
    But I can only do so much, everyone seems so heartless.
    Everywhere I go, it's all the same da** news.
    Everything looks okay, we'll get back to you soon.
    BULLS***!!
    Sometimes I feel like waiting outside til they get off work, hiding in the shadows.
    Camoflaged by darkness so when I sneak up on them they're baffled.
    But I do nothing but get further in debt.
    Sooner or later I might resort to my old ways.
    That seems like the only way I'll get paid.
    Since everyone who's interviewed me seems to be afraid.
    Punk Bit**es.
    Very soon I'm gonna take people for their riches,
    Cover their heads with a pillowcase so they'll only be victims, not snitches.
    "Just pray and God will give you what you ask for."
    Why must I keep asking for what is known that I need.
    Like a job so I can buy clothes for my seed.
    If my prayers don't get answered soon,
    I'M GONNA SNAP!![​IMG] [​IMG]
     
  2. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****, boo. calm down. i kno that feelin, when you aint tryin to feel nothin or nobody because it seems like everyone is against you. but i also kno that it can only get so bad before it gets better. so, try to stay positive because your seed needs YOU the most.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dayummmm!!! indeed calm down !!
    no need to frown
    whispers of prayers heard
    ya seed need ya more then u know
    slow down calm ya roll
    things will get better dis i'm told .....
     
  4. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    seeds spread on fertile ground
    will respond to natures sound
    as we have sown so we shall reap
    our feet
    have brought us to this place on the path
    of the greatest healings, they say its a laugh
     
  5. luvtoluv

    luvtoluv Member MEMBER

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    God looks after children and fools
    Keeping the faith is the golden rule
    Pray, then thank God in advance.
    I'm living proof-give him a chance.
     
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