Black Poetry : explaination not needed

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by candeesweet, Dec 26, 2012.

  1. candeesweet

    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    There is a certain age​
    Where being a nice guy is a given.​
    That's a time I can not wait for.​
    The immediant smile from across the room.​
    Silent for the unknown elderly flute.​
    Remember being nice is the point.​
    Oh my goodness​
    I don't have to feel bad.​
    When that unknown fathumed gull comes through.​
    We become lucky just to have company.​
     
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    TotalView Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exactly! Full of emotion, woven with that intricate thread you use, sis. Really nice.

    (smile)
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    straight and to the point!
     
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    candeesweet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We on the same page AS Ushual!! Thx for all "your" emotions given to us!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love how you spool this into emotions that flow from the pen .......nice write sis
     
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