Black Poetry : Expired

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mr marion, Aug 23, 2001.

  1. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Used to love you endlessly
    gave my dreams to build with you exclusively
    stop doing the things I did for your security
    never cheated: gave you strict fidelity
    made my commitment with all honesty
    told them all it's just you and me
    You still cant trust me...

    paid the bills on time
    came home on time
    never said this was the last time
    forgave you everytime---all the time


    slowly
    painfully
    consistently
    you get to me
    taking me
    to the final degree
    deteriorating my soul
    like ants on an apple



    my heart has been pouring
    souring
    touring
    new cities
    waiting for a train ride from you to come
    silly of me......

    I've got a case of
    Un-appreciated love
    un-seperated from your past love
    expired love ......
     
  2. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feelin' your flow Mr M...

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...yes...
    un-everything-but-love...

    write it...!
     
  4. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS

    FOR THE LOVE.. iT'S ABOUT A OLD SITUATION WHERE THE WATER TURNED TO STONE..
     
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    sad

    isn't it unfair that we can love someone so much and they don't love as much in return, but we keep hanging on....
    great piece...

    K
     
  6. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How you doin..

    Sherykah & Kitana
    Sometimes people dont want you until you leave.
    I treat insecurities like sour milk--Down the drain

    Thanks yall..
     
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