Black Poetry : Expectations

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  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She'll expect you to be fit
    Able to handle her endless array of movements
    She'll expect you to look at her
    All of her
    Dare not blink
    You may miss something
    Something she wants only you to see

    Your undivided attention is expected
    She has much to offer
    She will not waste time repeating
    What you will find to be your joy
    Be ready to accept it
    Or you may not understand it

    Expect to recieve a culmination
    Heart, mind, body and soul
    Working together
    Unlocking doors heavy with time
    But doors nontheless
    Needing to be opened
    You'll be expected to have a key

    Expect the unexpected
    Expect the best you will ever know
    You have been chosen to see her soul
    Perhaps see the source of her being
    Expect her to be different
    Expect her to be wonderful
    She is

    BE
     
  2. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHOA!!!!

    I heard this one
    Whispering
    About her
    Coming
    In the wind
    But
    Given the twists
    And turns
    Of the breeze
    I never
    Expected
    All of this

    How DO you do what you do so well??

    *unexpected*

    :) ;) :)
     
  3. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    BE....

    your ink is neva wasted!

    AlwaysPeace...
    Sunshyne~
     
  4. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heartbeat....

    Definitely a tyght and plentiful
    prose - to be expected from ya' though!!
    Keep it comin'!!
     
  5. belahni

    belahni Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is

    GOOD advice for any brotha who is intending to...
    make a lasting impression... :D

    love this, BE, tell it!

    B
     
  6. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling this, BE.

    "Expect her to be different
    Expect her to be wonderful
    She is"

    if we all went into relationships
    expecting a unique individual
    vice piling leftover baggage
    upon their person,
    life would treat us better
    'coz we would treat them better.

    thanks for this.

    SEARCHING THE HORIZON FOR JUST SUCH A ONE.

    peace.
     
  7. shaneak

    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So True

    I am definitely feeling this...your words are so true..so original...
     
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