Quiet Poetry Lounge : Expansion

[NittyGrit]

... this is liquid
we interact
like sand and seashores
a refreshing ebb and flow
of the desire for more

she is the tremble of my hands
the laughter in my smile
the flutter in my heart
racing for miles
across my spine

she orchestrates tingles
with the stroke of her finger
my pulse reaches its crescendo
and the resounding melody
not only lingers
... it resonates

i am her muse
I am repeat on her favorite track
she is my groove
yes, I got her back

i create in her presence
and feed off her essence
she nourishes my spirit
my soul food plate
from heaven

with her i find pleasure
in knowing my dreams
she is the smoothness of the mirror
that looks inside me
and reflects

bystanders wonder
how long we'll remain involved
i reply
until cliff edges stop jumping
and parachutes don't fall

 

[asimplepoet]

Awwwwwwww baby boy this is so sweet. U gonna make me a have a Kool Aid smile for a few hours..wishing i was her...lol

 

[$$RICH$$]

she gonna love this here ....u took the sweet out the sugar

 

[watzinaname]

When I thought one line was an endearing as it could get, the next line expanded upon those feelings. The two of you are blessed to have each other poet, how beautiful.

 

[PLATINUMILLITY1]

Y0u grooved from Music terminology anology, to staight and Strict Punchlines and The Whole thing was exqisite!!!!!!!
"when Cliffs stop Jumping
and Parachutes don't fall"

Flow ON my brother This Was GRADE A