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Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NittyGrit, May 9, 2008.

  1. NittyGrit

    NittyGrit Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... this is liquid
    we interact
    like sand and seashores
    a refreshing ebb and flow
    of the desire for more

    she is the tremble of my hands
    the laughter in my smile
    the flutter in my heart
    racing for miles
    across my spine

    she orchestrates tingles
    with the stroke of her finger
    my pulse reaches its crescendo
    and the resounding melody
    not only lingers
    ... it resonates

    i am her muse
    I am repeat on her favorite track
    she is my groove
    yes, I got her back

    i create in her presence
    and feed off her essence
    she nourishes my spirit
    my soul food plate
    from heaven

    with her i find pleasure
    in knowing my dreams
    she is the smoothness of the mirror
    that looks inside me
    and reflects

    bystanders wonder
    how long we'll remain involved
    i reply
    until cliff edges stop jumping
    and parachutes don't fall
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwww baby boy this is so sweet. U gonna make me a have a Kool Aid smile for a few hours..wishing i was her...lol
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she gonna love this here ....u took the sweet out the sugar
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When I thought one line was an endearing as it could get, the next line expanded upon those feelings. The two of you are blessed to have each other poet, how beautiful.
     
  5. PLATINUMILLITY1

    PLATINUMILLITY1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :em0400: Y0u grooved from Music terminology anology, to staight and Strict Punchlines and The Whole thing was exqisite!!!!!!!
    "when Cliffs stop Jumping
    and Parachutes don't fall"

    Flow ON my brother This Was GRADE A
     
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