Black Poetry : Expansion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by KneticAesthetic, Jul 6, 2004.

  1. KneticAesthetic

    KneticAesthetic New Member MEMBER

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    the melodies of our soul's have expanded
    beyond the highest pitch in whitney's chords
    b4 brown was around to demand it
    as i stand empty handed
    my only arm's a mind that's candid
    as i see the world collapse in panoramic
    Im a rebel!
    like 10 million sand pebbles
    in a WORLD WIN
    pardon me
    **** that
    I make no apologies
    when I write its escape
    my freedom's remorse 4
    10 million villages who were
    pillaged by diseased armies.
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    :star: welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & peace
    happy u here to share and give love upon the house
    this was a tyte write looking to read more of u !!!
    flow head poet! :toast: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  3. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    aaaaaaaaaawww... u finally warmin up.huh.. the battle has jus begun
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :wave: welcome to the family
    enjoy yaself.....nice drop
    enjoyed it...Angel
     
  5. 7thPoet

    7thPoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm feelin' this whole piece but was particularly delighted with this observation...

    your name is tight as well...

    lookin' for more...
     
  6. jazzymoonchild

    jazzymoonchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Welcome! I am lovin' your name! Great piece
     
  7. afrostotle

    afrostotle Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Way to Represent Fam.... :flame:

    This is some hypetypeisht right here kid...............
    Keep 'em coming...Peace, power, and Prosperity
     
  8. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    welcome knetic...
    feel free to drop your insight
    day or night...
    one love
    khasm
     
  9. Beautiful_by_me

    Beautiful_by_me Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: Welcome...nice words running across dis page, slaying before time has a chance to mark an excuse....do da **** ding.... :jumping:
     
  10. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Many write to escape, and where it takes us can be amazing. Welcome to destee, poet. I look forward to hearing more from you.
     
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