Black Poetry : Exospective

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Archival, Sep 9, 2001.

  1. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    so you fell in love with a feeling
    and a sound
    and the way a thought bends south
    in the wind
    as you fall for blue skies
    or gray ones
    this, way that feels of everything
    just feeling
    filling the empty spaces
    with sensation
    never meant to disconnect
    from introspect
    why did you close your mouth
    after the first
    just one long noise
    and you are still there
    hiding somewhere
    where your tears can't find you
    to be lost forever
    in the sea of emotion
    never seen
    though often visited
    in warm embraces
    and shades of blue

    --Archival
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    SHADES OF BLUE
    U LAID THIS OUT IN MOTION
    AND VIBE TO THE MAX.....FLOW ON !:toast:
     
  3. Archival

    Archival Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks

    Thanks rich, it's good to be back with some of my infrequent thought. I need to come around more often, catching up on all the flows I've missed is time consuming because theres always "one more" to reel you in. Regardless, it's time well spent of course.
    Have a good night,

    --Archival
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "hiding somewhere
    where your tears can't find you
    to be lost forever
    in the sea of emotion
    never seen
    though often visited
    in warm embraces
    and shades of blue"

    this verse holds much truth for me. I sometimes find it easier to hide and keep people at arms length, but I'm an emotional fool :) so I often dive in the sea, and on ocassion I miss the warm embraces, and feel misty blu.


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    Perspective

    Perspective is everything and seeing this through your eyes make me aware that all things can be beautiuful--Amun-Ra

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