Black Poetry : Exit.

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  1. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Quietly I roll from under your arm.
    I ease out of our love nest and
    gather my clothes and as I look
    on you I see the sweetest complexion
    of caramel and I just want to
    take a taste.
    Remembering all the passion
    from the night sets off alarms
    and brings shivers of pleasure.
    I need to exit before the sun
    rises. But you body seems to be
    calling me to stay. I hesitate as I
    contemplate how sweet it
    would be to make love to
    rising sun and the chirping
    birds.
    Wanting to leave becomes less and
    less of a desire,
    I just want to be held and loved a little
    more.
    You turn to see where I went and as
    your eyes reach mine
    the idea of an exit disappears.
    Can't get enough of that caramel loving.
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice likes the vibe off this
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    awaking to the beauty
    of ya coco body as u
    sway to the east under
    the rising sun beam
    as my eye meet u
    knowing i lone the taste
    of ya sweet natur and
    feel da comfort of ya
    skin close to mines
    taking me back into
    the night before
    and knowing da desires
    are less and less
    calling in to work today
    i'll be late coz my baby
    need me home
    birds singing our song
    as we lay
     
  4. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Mz. Blk glad you enjoyed.
     
  5. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$R$$

    And so it seems the
    morning sun wakes us
    and the birds seem to sing
    to us the song of love.
    Your eyes intoxicating and your
    caress seems to pull ne
    into the haze of the night before
    as we re-enact and re-write the play.
    Same song new verse you and I
    laying and loving until the sun
    sets.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    til moon light
    as the glow of
    love caress us into
    the far landz of bliss
    as the new chapter
    is written verse by verse
    and kiss by kiss
    with motion & essence
    of reasons and warmth
    my body yearn
    ya body burns
    we hub in our nest
    making musical love
    notes for tomorrow
    song
     
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    Very Beautiful Flows Thatgirl and Rich!
    I love the passion strumming between both
    vibes!
    Very Beautiful indeed!
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was very lovely. Such beautiful visions described, very nicely done.
     
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    Nice drop sista!!!! I like this one alot!!!!
     
  10. thatgirl74

    thatgirl74 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much Watz and Turtle.
    I am glad you are digging my flow.
    I am encouraged to continue.
     
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