Black Poetry : Exit Wound

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by cocobutterskyn, Mar 14, 2002.

  1. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We were intimately acquainted
    initial impact~ ahhh! so sweet
    as if laced with saccharin....
    (five hundred times sweeter than sugar)
    some form of mind altering drug
    causing temporary insanity (ha, ha)

    ~yeah, thats right
    obscuring imperfections
    hey, your guess is as good as mine
    ~why else couldn't I see obvious signs?

    we enjoyed a lot of wonderful years
    creating beautiful memories
    ~until the dreamy smoke cleared
    and love's sedative effects began to wear.
    that is when I found myself~
    smack dab in the middle of reality

    love had made it's exit wound
    without an anaesthetic agent
    ****! that **** hurts


    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
  2. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Coco,

    Queen this is deep and so true. nice.

    blak
     
  3. Rashad

    Rashad Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep dat **** hurt!!

    This here is Tyte!
    I like alot!!

    Flow on Poet
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Blak & Rashad,

    Yep its true.......

    Feels so **** good going in,
    hurts like hell coming out.

    I just had a thought
    Sounds a lot like Childbirth :laugh:
    (ignore that you two) :D

    Thanks for the love Brothas :)

    Poetically Turn'd Out!
    CCBSKYN :heart:
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Butta~

    Kan I get a sedative?!? Do they make a pain killa fa dat ****?

    I love the entire construction of this joynt right hea!!! I see your brilliance!

    Reas
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey, i know that pain...intimately acquainted with it. Yo, Reas, you wanna pass dat sedative on. i need a hit.

    loved the flow.
     
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    mizdee2002 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i got a few gun shot wounds myself!

    tyte and ryte, sista gurl!
    dee
     
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    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cocoa

    ...when those ego boundaries collapse-
    when the candlelight grows weak and romantic haze
    meets fact...

    ..look out ! cause thats when "puppy love" gets tested to see
    if it can graduate to THAT ....HARDCORE LOVE....

    it's alwayz good while it lasts though ..ain't it ?

    tyght drop here ...and so true.

    peace
    g-man
     
  9. Danilyn

    Danilyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate Coco! When somebody can come
    up wit a cure for dat ****, they gonna get paid!
    Don't let me find a laboratory! In fact, I think I'm
    gonna get one of those science kits and start
    messin around. I'll let you know what I come up with!:)
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    ****

    feeling the pain

    where would we be
    without the scars?

    dssNY
     
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