Black Poetry : Exit The Dreamer

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  1. TightAmbitionz

    TightAmbitionz Member MEMBER

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    Exit The Dreamer

    “There’s a quiet storm
    I never felt this way before…”
    Isn’t that what Sade said?
    I’m afraid that I have been misled.
    Because after the quiet storm
    The smooth tempo
    The hot rush
    The fresh sweet smell
    And wet taste
    Comes the demise.
    Clouds close up
    And glide away.
    After the rupture
    The chasm
    Of feeling and music
    Has the storm come too soon?
    Bright and loud
    Here comes the sun
    Too bright to see
    Too strong to hear
    Let me know how I can let you down easy
    From your dream.
    “If I tell you…
    If I tell you now…”
    A-
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

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    welcome to destee.com
    likes ya flow
    cant wait to read more
    peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome

    :toast: welcome to destee.com poetic playground
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    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flows well
     
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    thanks for the love...i waited a long minute to post
     
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    happy u did welcome to the family
    now let the ink run free as love is given
    flow on sistah
     
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    The highs of the dream and then sometimes, the lows...liked the way you posed this, and welcome to destee.
     
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    Hypnotize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That was nice !

    Very, Very Nice.
     
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    deepy going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    the dreamer flows with creativity..
    thanks for the poem/sharing of it...
     
  10. blakverb

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    welcome sister...nice piece...


    blak
     
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