Black Poetry : existence

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by MORE, Jul 21, 2003.

  1. MORE

    MORE Banned MEMBER

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    i knew you
    before i even met you
    saw your eyes
    when i closed mine

    felt your presence
    all around me
    and all the trials i've been thru
    prepared me for you.

    saw your face in
    distant shadows
    like horizons
    on desert plains

    felt your touch
    and smelled your skin
    inside my body
    your formation
    begin.

    i used to wonder
    how long would it take
    for u to
    finally to appear

    with no name to
    match the face i
    was disillusioned for a moment
    but now, you're here.

    and i spoke of you
    in many stories
    not as a hero but as
    another part of me

    that was out there
    searching for connection
    to find the water
    for thirsty seeds.

    u make me laugh
    u make me cry
    u help me learn
    u teach me why

    take me to levels
    i'm born to know
    in this space
    u can now grow

    i knew you
    before i met you
    saw your eyes
    when i closed mine

    the hurt and pain
    bruised ribs and veins
    has given me wisdom
    and paved the way

    to take your hand
    and lead you too
    the moment that
    has been
    spoken
    into
    existence...
     
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    Beautiful sistah More! This piece is enriched with your passionate being!
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is wonderful MORE..
    very beautiful
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    o'my sistah u scribe a beautiful flow
    wow!
    loved it
     
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