Black Poetry : Existence (A throwback)

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  1. Siren

    Siren Active Member MEMBER

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    As a soft summer breeze trickles
    Through the very cracks of my soul
    And creeps into the very depths of my being
    I think of you......

    I think of the laughs we've had
    The trials we've been through
    I think of the kisses you've planted
    Leaving the seeds of love that have blossomed.
    And the passion in the love we make.....
    You have engulfed me Mind, Body, and Soul...
    I now realize with every stroke,
    You've reached into my very existence
    And have grabbed, and held fast to my very essence

    You've torn down my walls and built bridges...
    You've licked my tears
    And held at bay my fears...
    You breathe me
    You keep me
    Warm in your arms, and feed me
    Thoughts of our future complete me

    You exist in and around me,
    Even when you're not with me
    I feel you
    You seep into that which I am
    You compliment me
    Like the leaves to a tree
    You are rooted in me
    One cannot tell where you end
    And where I begin
    Intertwined in this gift called existence.
     
  2. cherryblossom

    cherryblossom Banned MEMBER

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    I CAN'T STAND YOU!

    But, I mean that in a good way! lol


    You WROTE this thang!

    Loved it! But I don't think I can't take any more like this one today!
     
  3. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Whoaaa,
    A love like this, don't coming knocking EVERYDAY!! oh, it felt so good reading such love. Thanks for the spark sis, thanks for assuring us there's still love like this still exits.
    Awesome piece.
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    here's to a better time...

    ...a better place...where love and life followed the trace...where heartbeat led and love went too...and everyday seemed new and true...and i love you meant I LOVE YOU.

    nicely done

    the river floweth
     
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    Existing in the warmth of someone's soul is a beautiful thang, Siren and you have penned the emotions exquisitely.


    epiphany:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O...my goodness this was so deep wit depth and str8 banggin to da mental love this joint sis
     
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