Black Poetry : Exhalin

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  1. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ok, iin order for someone to understand this poem, you must read "Just Exhalin"



    I haven't felt such a rush since my first time
    So what makes you so sublime?
    For all I know you could be just like that otha *****
    Love me, break out..and you wonder how I figga?
    True, A girl like me loves to commit
    But I've tried it before and it turned into sh*t...

    I'm inhalin...exhaling....yet I feel ..... nothing

    Ok,your saying all the right lines?
    But do something to convince me this time?
    I know all of the things that you will do!
    Your a freaky mother f*cker and I am too.
    OoO, so you wanna make my toes curl?
    Well, try to turn me, twist me, make me swirl

    I'm closing my eyes ..........and I'm tastin you.........

    Yes! I feel your intentions bottled up inside!
    If you cum on this journey, I demand that I ride
    Oh ! my cat feels the need of that juicy tounge
    Putting your flesh into mine , ****** me til Kigdom come!
    Oh! Oh!...I so need to arch my back at the lightest of your caress
    For me to wrap my legs around you so you do what you do best

    ..........

    But yet!
    What happens after the sex?
    Do we simply go on above our lives as If it wera all a dream?
    Or will we cuddle? Oh, or do it again so that I cream?
    There's nothing wrong with being playfull, I just have to be smart
    Im so though with making love and yet him killing my heart
    I tell you this needs to be somthing more
    Sumthing that he never could give..somthing I'm still waiting for
    You want to do me a favor? You want to make me feel better?...
    Don't let me wake up next to a "Call me sumtimes" letter..


    I'm breathing....I'm imaging.....................yet ..........

    You gotta show me that you're different
     
  2. Shango

    Shango Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tis is some real profound **** here................If it was me I wouldn't even do you like that........Hit it n leave I mean......I like poetry that move me....................and this one did..........
     
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    lol SwtT u got it, ill respond back to this one, when i come back home. so be on the look out. i like this poem, its tight.
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Shango!!! I am very glad that you enjoyed it :)

    LOL poet!! I'll be lookin out for ya :)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what u say !!
    dis here is off da hook
    u know i wouldn't even try
    to play dis game
    but after doing it i would love u deeper
    wow! u on fire
     
  6. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Rich! I know fa sho you wouldn't play me becuz you are all above LOVE!:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    SwtT! gurl you are bout it like that! feelin your no nonsence tolerence!