Black Poetry : Exhale.....

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by watzinaname, Dec 18, 2003.

  1. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Happy birthday indeed....
    inside I bleed, out
    my veins bursting
    with your essence, no doubt.
    Why should this day matter?
    spent the day seething,
    grittin my teeth,
    trouble breathing.
    Why should this day matter?
    I f-----up royally, it's true
    now you even hate the air
    that I breathed into you.
    Even though the air was pure,
    it wasn't what you needed.
    You could no longer endure.
    Happy birthday, indeed....
    Exhale....
     
  2. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this so beautiful and warm lovin da flow here
     
  3. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    we all need the exhale...wonderful flow
     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Trying to be warm, but I have ice in my veins....thanks Rich.
    Yes we all need to exhale sometimes, mzblkangel, thank you
     
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    thought provoking...
    but well scribed
    as all your work is
     
  6. BaduX

    BaduX Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I luv this one ndeed!!!
    GOD BLESS :toast:
     
  7. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thankyou, angelicsage....trying to write out these feelings...
     
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    re to watzinaname

    watzinaname Thank you for expressing your self
    This day should matter because if one is not saved
    from the wrath of God to be revealed at the right time
    ONE CAN USE THIS DAY TO REPENT AND BELIEVE THAT
    GOD RAISED JESUS FROM THE DEAD

    GOD bless you
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece was a rant more than anything else, not about my birthday but someone else's.
    Sorry I never thanked you for the luv on this BaduX. To say I was feeling out of sorts is an understatement.
    Thank you Alpha Male, we should never forget what God has done no matter what day it is.
     
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