Black Poetry : Excuuuse Me Sistah!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Joyce, May 23, 2001.

  1. Joyce

    Joyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuuuse me sistah,
    But I just gotta say this;
    I know that he did you wrong,
    But I've seen some good men
    And I know they exist.

    Cuz one lays in the
    Crook of my arm.
    His dark skin cuddles me
    Until I'm comfy and warm.

    We talk and take walks,
    Enjoying the simple things in life.
    He is my beloved,and
    I am proud to be his wife.

    Excuuuse me sistah,
    But my man ain no dog,
    He jes works like one,
    From the rising and the
    Setting of God's flaming sun.

    If you don't set a standard
    And you don't take your time,
    You're bound to get a man,
    Who ain' worth a dime.

    Excuuuse me sistah,
    But don't dis "all" of our black men.
    There are so many brothas
    Who are doing the best they can.

    Let us help them, pray for them,
    That God will prosper their cause,
    Instead of calling "all"
    The brothas, low down dirty dogs.

    So focus on God first and
    That man will definitely come.
    He'll be all you ever wanted,
    Umph!... and then some.



    A Black Sista's Thang
     
  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    Alllllriiiiight!

    i heard that

    keep flowin'

    and welcome Joy :wave:
     
  3. Destee

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    aaahhhhh Joyce !!!

    this flavor of flow would be welcomed anywhere!
    no matter the topic of the forum ... if it's poetry
    this should be there!!!

    thank you for seasoning our pot *delicious*

    :heart:

    Destee
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Joyce

    you betta say it sista. I got me one too. With his chocolate molasses keeping me stuck to him like glu. Yes, excuuuse me fo real. Loved it
     
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    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you for shining your light on the subject and defending the often accused.
    Cheers to your good man for Representing
    :toast:
     
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    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :jumping: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star: :star:
    yes yes yes yes yes yes yes
    I'm FEELLIINN this flow !
    you are soooooo right!
    I haven't foundhim yet but I KNOW with all my heart that one just like this truly exists just for little ole me !!:p
     
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    jazzybelle Member MEMBER

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    you are so right joyce
     
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    bassaman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a lesson

    for brothas AND sistas! Thanks for bringing it like this.


    ciao
     
  9. cela

    cela Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tell the truth Joyce!

    Say it LOUDER!!!!!

    Tight and so REAL!

    thank you, sis!


    CELA
     
  10. T

    T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    say that!

    Amen, my sistah, amen!


    T
     
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