Black Poetry : Excuses!

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  1. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuses

    A year is no time at all.
    In a year, a baby won’t choose to walk over crawl.
    But in a year you’ve given him a lot of power.
    He stands in yo face and reminds you that he’ll slap yo a** down.
    All you have to say on his behalf is “He’s a Gemini, he has a right to clown.”
    Gemini or not, you better check both his fu**in’ personalities.
    Why give him what he wants . . . set his black a** free.
    He sees you in public and doesn’t even speak,
    A day later he’s in your face playing weak.
    F*** that! F*** him!
    You need to pack yo sh** and tie yo Tims.
    You laugh at the stuff he does, but it AIN’T funny.
    This is the real world, you better check yo self honey.
    You gotta job now . . . is he after yo money.
    I guess you can’t tell he has no class.
    But then again, you probably deserve his trifflin’ a**.
     
  2. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    TWINS

    I like this. Queen, you ain't said nothin' but the truth!

    (Easy on Gemini-) :D
     
  3. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LOL...Sorry about the Gemini thing...if your personalities are both cool..I can respect that!
     
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    this right here was hot!!! 4 some reason it made me laugh. much love :)
     
  5. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    tyte poem!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    lol diggin' this flow!
    Peace to ya!
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OUCH!!! but, then, they say the TRUTH has to be SPOKEN. so, SPEAK your peace.:)

    let the river flow.
     
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    OoO THANK YOU FOR DISSING GEMINI!(um sorry 1poet but my Triflin ex was a gemini) Royal, you hit the X mark right on point! Great flow:)
     
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    ouch that had to hurt somebody....truth speaks loudly...thanx 4 it
     
  10. Royal_T

    Royal_T Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    it shouldn't hurt that bad...it's actually directed at a relative of mine. She's a bit nuttty. But thanks so much for the love yall!
     
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