Black Poetry : Excuse me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by rapchild, May 5, 2012.

  1. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me can i talk 2 u for a second
    i mean do u mind if i ask you a few questions
    so u livin ya life
    what if i told u,u livin a lie
    constantly ignorin ya feelin inside
    cuz deep within,u know da way u living aint right
    what if i told u da land u know as ya home
    will b soon gone
    so if i did n proved it wud u live differently
    but i no u still u wont change
    i know u still wont believe me
    cuz we humans r so hard headed
    wudnt really listen even if is God dat said it
    believe it or not da world is comin 2 an end
    n u can bet it
    i no is da wrong time 2 try n win lotto
    cuz u wont live 2 collect it
    but dats life 4 u
    ya closest family n friends r ya enemies
    trust me they wont fight 4 u
    they all pretend 2 b loyal
    till u get broke,put behind bars
    then they will ride ya girl,
    n then they will ride ya car.
    n finally when u get free
    they will pretend they dnt know who u are
    n thats truth u better face reality
    n face it soon.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Sho nuff right
    tell it in da light
    this my fight
    to get'em right
    love what u bring
    let it be heard
    continue to sing
    because the word
    must be known
    this place so called home
    soon will be gone
    flow on !!!!
     
  3. rapchild

    rapchild Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo thanks rich nuff respect n thanks errbody 4 reading.1 luv
     
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    Rapchild spittin' wild ~

    :rolleyes:
     
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