Black Poetry : Excuse Me Miss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by pdouble27, Apr 20, 2004.

  1. pdouble27

    pdouble27 New Member MEMBER

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    Excuse me miss, my name is Phil.
    Let me tell you what I want,
    I want you, I need you,
    I need you to need me,
    I need you so we can go around my ******,
    and I can front like I'm big time,
    I need you to feed my ego
    tell me I look good, and out of every dude you been with,
    I treat you the best
    Is that alright?
    Matter fact there's more
    I need you yo help me get over these complexes and conditions I've acquired over time
    They slowly but surely destroying my mind
    One got me doubting my position and purpose in society
    Another got me wonderin can I get pass the stereotypes and misognystic views that me and the male species have laced yall with, I call it the Ike Turner disease
    Can you help me cherish you for the spiritual, brilliant, attractive women you are
    Am I askin for to much?
    By the way, what's your name?
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    laying da P down
    rap on brutha rap on !
    tyte flowing
     
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    Alpha Male Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    rply to pdouble27

    misognystic What is meaning
    is it hatrred of woman
    very great poem

     
  4. Obscure

    Obscure Active Member MEMBER

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    Nice drop

    "I need you to feed my ego"

    ^^^ fav. line.

    I lost the meaning of it with the ike turner desease line....
    it was funny though...lol
    Stay up

    WuN...
     
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