Black Poetry : excuse me miss

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by thespokesman, Aug 23, 2003.

  1. thespokesman

    thespokesman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the 3rd remix
    thanks to poetically speakin
    you inspired me to write the other half's
    i hope im not wrong by sharing this
    no beef intended

    Excuse me Miss

    They call you Miss cuz u been misused
    Here’s a tissue, but nah, that’s not the issue
    On hand mommy, I tell where I stand mommy
    You’re so insecure, your expectations are scrawny
    Your so hard, I’m a call you brawny
    Quick her pick her up her, u really just wanna know Johnny

    Let’s get this straight; you say you all women and real
    But the real deal, you can barely walk in your high heel
    Looking all jazzy with ya tattoos, fake minolo
    Truth is that you broke but want a dude with dolo
    You don’t want a man; you want an exec stuffing his ties
    While you lay back in the cut stuffing pies
    Your payless shoes shows you why u only get cheap dates
    Skating on your rank rink, so you’s a cheap skate

    No I’m done, no interruption
    You done you’re talking, no time for discussion
    I seen a lot of your type, yeah you fine
    But it takes a lil more than fine to really enjoy your view from behind
    This verbal laceration hopefully will cut your heart and you’ll see
    Your wel-ild support ain’t gone be stuck on me
     
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    Virgil Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sticking it to em' I see. Good expression.
     
  3. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    I see you're finding yourself.

    Nice...but uhh ruhhh...no beef, plz.

    :toast: :D
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow letting it flow outward keep doing it
    coz i'm lovin it
     
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