Black Poetry : Exctasy of the Tongue...Part 2...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Its our first time doin' this together
    So that's why the specialty is even more of a pleasure
    As we had wanted to do this for so long
    But the timing, the places, the mood was all wrong
    But tonight we're just takin' a walk on the beach
    The moonlit skies make the sand loose its heat
    My hand is alone, until yours takes it slowly
    Caressing its softness ever so boldly
    My breath gets a little short, but you don't seem to mind
    It just shows you that I'm enjoying your touches just fine
    We stop the walk so suddenly and I am surprised
    Until you cup my face so gently, while looking into my eyes
    The look you give me baby, almost makes me moan
    And then I actually do when your mouth touches my own
    First it's just lips, lightly, and soft
    Then the tongue slides inside, fiery and all
    Reaching the back of my mouth to elicit a moan
    That turns you on so much that your services condone
    There's heat rising up, even on this cool night
    The winds blows and the moon shines, making things just right
    I want so **** bad, and its as simple as that
    Plus there's no one around to obtain this lovely fact
    It's just you and me craving this moment ever so much
    I loose all the little control I had, from one simple touch
    You can look in my eyes and tell that I'm ready to be taken
    And give my everything on this night of heavenly lovemakin'
    The kisses begin again as you travel down my face
    gradually lickin' my neck as we embrace
    You take your sweet time as you pull of blouse
    licking your way to my breast and my moans become loud
    as fingers insinuate to a moist and special place
    and for the rest of this story you will have to wait...
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    look out for part 3....comin' soon...
     
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    DAAAAYYYYYYYUUUUUUUUUUUMMMMMMMM!!!!!!! :eek:

    That was heavii. I like the fact that the rhyming couplets are subtly placed and don't overpower the general tone of the flow. I await part 3 with anticipation.
     
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    *resetting my pacemaker*

    ****, girl. well written; you took us on the ride with you...
     
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    wow...i feel like im being
    taken for a ride...
    peace
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da magic
    of da twist
    in ya mouth
    tongue kiss
    heated passion
    romantic burst
    licking away
    to clinch ya thirst

    slowly down by
    da sandy shore
    waterwave crash
    as love bash
    wit da tongue
    smoothly cross ya
    tummy tum !!
    ya body beckon 4 more
    of da tongue
    where it goes
    u'll feel it in da next show
    ummmmm! da tongue !!!
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awwwwwwwwwwwww thanks so much Laydeechups and sugar brown and khasm:)
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** rich!!!!!!!!! u wrote part three!!! lol


    the wonder of the magic that lies in the twist
    formed from the mouth to entertain with tricks
    passionate and benevolent to fulfill all desires
    bursting of magnificent to receive all that requires
    a parched and ready mouth, ready to devour
    the clinching wetness of another mouth in the same hour

    all this down by the lovely beach under the moonlit sky
    as tongues compassionate give lovely treats unto you and i
    the climax of tongues hungrily lick and crash in sync with the waves
    the peak of the feeling of tongues gone and reeling that feelings can't be saved

    as i feel the sliding of your tongue across my beautiful tummy
    and you look up at me with those beautiful eyes and say baby you are yummy!! lol:)
     
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    i like'd dat ............lol

    da tongue don't stop there
    it wiggle around everywhere
    down ya spin da center of ya back
    caressing da tense of a bliss
    working da load to ya gold
    as it ummmm!!
    right there
    only ya body knows
    the tip of da tongue
    juicy n' wet
    soon da body break out in sweat
    on da track smooth glide
    whoa !!
    as it move deep inside
    to make da swoosh))) sound
    da moan & groan
    da grip of handz
    toes to a curl
    da tongue blast
    fast in swrils like
    da pool of love it swish
    deep down for da daily dish
    it da master of one's kiss
    erotically & extremely bliss

    da tongue the teacher of
    pac-man da enterwined
    of a twist inside in a mix
    u can't run nor hide
    once da tongue start inside
    da groove of a smooth flow
    sliding in ummmm! u know
    so da steam now cover da page
    look like thangz heated
    bodies crave
    up in flyte i go before i put on
    a erotic extreme show

    Up ! uP ! up ! UP ! and AWayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy)))))))))>>>--$R
     
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    flying cross da city
    da dream master set to strike tonight !
    ya twisted tongue flow is tyte
     
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