Black Poetry : Exctasy of the Tongue...Part 1...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    faintly it licks the lips of mine
    oh so sweet
    deeply it thrusts between my lips
    to give me a special treat
    further it carries into my mouth
    to work its fatal wonders
    tryin' to turn my body out
    by its awesome thunder
    holdin'
    grippin'
    and claspin' my own
    to intertwine its wetness
    wanting eagerly to hear me moan
    but only if i would let it
    soon it wants to hear me scream
    your name all during the night
    and thats when it has the feeling
    for a sweet, yet subtle delight
    that wet and fatal tongue of yours
    can inflict so much joy
    and at the same time use its deep contours
    to tease me and annoy
    by sliding leisurely down to my neck
    to massage the lovely flesh
    twisting
    and sucking
    and grasping
    and moaning
    like i've never seen before
    making me try to conceal my groaning
    when implies that i want more
    in the midst of my concealment
    you can tell that i want you
    and so with this revealment
    you take your time and continue
    and that tongue of yours
    moves down to my chest
    to go back and forth
    licking gracefully at its best
    writhing and yearning for more
    making me scream
    and begging for this
    more than anything
    its giving me bliss
    desperately i want you to control it
    but you can't and i yell
    as your tongue moves with no remorsement
    it glides down further
    and i'm about to scream
    the tip goes riding down like cream
    as the tongue itself begins to ignite
    a fire of exctasy and pleasure like.........



    stay tuned for part two....
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    licking da chops
    lovin da lips
    gives a essence
    of sweet delight
    to make me come
    from flyte upon
    a treat like dis at night
    so bring on pt.ll
    i wanna know what
    all tongue can do
    wooooooweeeeeeeeeee!! gurl

    u figured me out .........lol
    tyte playful poetic scribe
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the lips so sweet
    as my hearts skips a beat
    the esscence so soft
    that my emotins become crossed
    i come is awe from the serenity i feel
    and i know there is more love and caresses to reveal
    why don't you show me what your tongue can do
    to make me feel as sexily as i do....


    lol, thanks rich:)
     
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    tongue can enterwined
    relax u to a beautiful divine
    erotic motions
    make u rock like an ocean
    sweet lashing
    tongue twist
    inside as it kiss
    ummmm! how it make u moan
    feel like ya right at home
    the essence of a romantic flava
    tongue song # 1
    da meal off da table
    make ya body crave
    as it swoosh!! inside
    mixing up a potion
    leaving an affection
    to ya mental direction

    soft , midhard , hot erotic
    fast , slow , round it go
    in and out u never know
    tongue bring da ahhhh!
    in it and make u really
    want it
    so pt.ll come on down
    i'm ready to make ya
    frown from da bliss
    of da tongue kiss..........

    see u making me .....well smile !
    tongue is da funtown up & down.
    c'mon pt.ll i'm ready too
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    **** rich!....u wrote part two rite there!!! lol....anyway its comin' soon...i'm in the hospital rite now so i'm tryin' to sleep instead of write...it should be up by monday or tuesday....

    ~lovely~
     
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    take care ......get well no rush
    just remember da lasher !!!..............lol
     
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    lol, i will:)
     
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    part two is comin'....get ready!!!!
     
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    READY coz i have da touch of da tongue now !!!
    bring it on
     
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    too HOT!!!!!!!!! You and rich ya given me a case of da vapors hmmmm more like a hot flash goin wickie whack lol
     
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