Black Poetry : ...exclusive-ly.

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  1. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you have forever
    altered my light…
    & i didn’t know
    that i could shyne
    this bright…in spite…
    of the differences in
    years of existence &
    obstacles created by
    geographical distance
    …i find myself unable
    to resist loving you…
    …exclusive-ly

    no longer… it seems…
    is happiness
    eluding me—
    she is sitting on my
    doorstep like the
    proverbial “surprise package”
    that i’ve anticipated
    & patient-ly awaited…
    for onethousand eighthundred
    twentyfive days…
    (you do the math) :D
    & i hope she stays
    cause i am loving you
    …exclusive-ly

    i mean—

    i am feeling you... right now...
    as if it was
    the very first time…
    you looked into my eyes
    …took my hand
    & led me in… to the
    wonderful world of
    me&you possibilities

    you… alone…
    move & enlighten me
    with your wisdom...
    …your old soul
    beautifulblack king
    mentality has
    penetrated deep-ly...
    & rendered me helpless-ly
    willing to be...
    the mother of your children
    & the answer to your
    every heartbeat...

    i want to… speak…
    to you in the language
    of infinity...
    so that you will know
    without a doubt that
    you are exclusive-ly
    myeverything...
    & you will always be
    “the best part of us”.

    © SunShyneOrygynals 2002, all rights reserved.
     
  2. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ultra head girl where have u been?!

    miss you ( don't let that blow your head up even bigger )
    just playin.

    you most definitely have not lost the nfinite touch.
    do i have to get the ball and chain to keep you here elayne? (hence the first name basis call out :D)

    nfinite love,
    jh

    p.s
    if your head gets any bigger, you'd be Osama Bin Laden's next target :lol:
    i crack myself up...
     
  3. Natasha

    Natasha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GA gurl

    you went and touched my heart ...yet again!


    sweet : Natasha
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey, hey...could you slice me a piece of that love pie. DAYUM...stuff done gone and got thick up in here.:)

    DEDICATED LOVE IS A WONDERFUL THING, MY SISTAH.
    speak from ya soul...coz ya heart be beautiful.
     
  5. msluciousb

    msluciousb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UMMMMMMM HUH!

    THANKS FOR SHARING A BEAUTIFULLY, STIRRING PIECE OF POETRY THAT HAD ME THINKING THE SAME WAY...MYSTICAL AND MAGICAL HOW COLLECTIVE EXPERIENCES CAN BE...SOUNDS LIKE LOVE TO ME! I SHOULD KNOW...:D
     
  6. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well alright then, it is very good to see your work here, but I do understand that genoese does sometimes take time.
     
  7. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    layne

    u still got it not that it ever went anywhere so it must be all to the no good withcha and of course what sherrie said too:D

    "i want to… speak… to you in the language of infinity..." (now that's some sexy scribin)






    Lil Bit
     
  8. redlady

    redlady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was a beautiful read...and a tribute to how things should and can be. Thank you for sharing that with me!
     
  9. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alwaysthanks.


    jp. i ain't been hidin'... i've been right beside you, but
    your head was blockin' me from view! (LOL) ...i been missin'
    you too sweetie!! but don't tell nobody, kay? thank you for
    always showin' me love. let's kinnect... soon! nfiniteLove.

    nat. it was my pleasure GaGurl! thanks for reading!

    b. you's a mess! a slice?? imma make you a whole pie
    of your own darlin'!! :D oh yeah! it takes a beautiful heart
    to recognize one!! rememba dat!! :heart:

    sherrie. point taken!! :tongue:

    msluciousb. thanks for takin' the time to read&reply...
    i 'preciate cha... much! i know you be knowin' 'bout that love
    thang!! :D

    shazzy. :tongue: flattery will get you everywhere!! :lol:
    are you satisfied now??!! huh?!! LOL thanks for your support
    my dear!!

    zorb-shun. only you would describe that line as "some
    sexy scribin'"...:lol: you sho have a way of brightenin' my
    day lil sister!! thank you for every **** thang!! :D

    red. i'm honored like crazee that you enjoyed this peace!
    thank you for taking the time to reply!! :)

    :heart: :heart: itsallLove, chirens!! :heart: :heart:
     
  10. sraheem2

    sraheem2 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this tender peace

    jumped out at me, sweet p/e. It is my hope that your coronation remains all your heart desires.

    May you feel this way beyond a year from today.

    :heart:

    ME
     
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