Black Poetry : Exchange

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  1. Envy

    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Exchange

    Can we exchange a bit? Just me and you
    Exhange our love for eachother if we can stay true?
    Can we exchange a bit? Just you and I
    Exchange our bad relationships to be by eachother's side?
    Can we exchange a bit? Just with our own special words
    Exchange glances that only we can read and can't be heard?
    Can we exchange a bit? Just with our own special kiss
    Exchange calm perfect times of bliss?
    Can we exchange a bit? Just exchange a little baby?
    Exchange every sweet conversation of nothingness, maybe?
    Can we exchange a bit? Just things that are a must?
    Exchange honesty, respect, love, and trust?

    Yeah...you say we can exchange...you'd love to.
    You say we can exchange our love for one another if we stay true.
    You say we can exchange...yes just you and I.
    You say we can exchange bad relationships to be by eachother's side.
    You say we can definately exchnage with our own special words.
    You say You'd love to exchange glances and touches that we can only read but can't be heard.
    You say yes my love we can exchange with our own special kiss.
    You say nothing can be exchanged for our calm perfect bliss.
    You say we can exchange more than a little bit baby.
    Our sweet conversation of nothingness is a positive, not a maybe.
    You say we have to exchange these other things because they are a must.
    You say I'm the only girl that you've already exchanged your honesty, respect, love, and trust.

    Exchange
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    www i liked the way you wrote this back and forth :D
     
  3. Envy

    Envy Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you! Your support has put a smile on my face. Thanks again!:)
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the new family u found
    welcome from above your flow was tyte
    now up up as i take flyteeeeee)))))))>
    :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave: :wave:
     
  5. Envy

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    :) Thanks $$RICH$$, for the welcome and the compliment. Along with feeling happy I feel welcome. Again, thanks! And by the way your poems are hott, keep at 'em!
     
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    Thank you do may your self at home here
    we happy you join the family poetically
     
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