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  1. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    1.

    it's behind the thicket of thorns
    the moats
    the granite walls
    - your heart
    I can see it through the deep windows of your eyes
    I push on
    I wait
    at last
    you offer it to me with trembling hands
    I inspect it
    notice some stitches still aren't
    ready to come out yet
    it's OK
    I press it close to my body
    carefully
    because I know it's still fragile
    I want to warm it with my love
    ease it
    please let me hold it
    I promise I won't
    drop it

    2.

    the way you walk in grace
    head high
    as if tall were the only way
    to be
    the yin is in your face
    so kind
    tenderness in your
    brown eyes
    which travel from
    sultry to surprised
    cheekbones and
    forehead work
    together in
    nobility
    experience scars
    on skin so soft
    like diamonds on a
    velvet sea
    your scent, sweeter than
    every flower together
    this is why you're so
    beautiful to me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    when we speak of essence these surely stand up
    the first one took my heart and the second one
    made me want to feel and be felt wow!!!!
    gempis u making me fall in love now ...better stop

    these was so divine and lovely i gotta read again
    to savior it in my mental thankz for this ride inside
     
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    wow my sistah this is tight.....
    you out done ya self on this indeed.....
    flow on i am feelin it
    very well posed and done
    LOVE YOU GURL!!!!!!!
    peace
    Angel
     
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    The first one was like a symphony of strategically placed piercing images. And the second just had this regal aura to it. Don't ever stop scribing poet.
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awww. Now I'm gonna :cry:

    Thank you for your love and kind words, you beautiful 3. I can't think of too many things that make me feel better than your support. Much love to each of you. :grouphug: :grouphug: :grouphug: Thanks so much.
     
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    GEMPIS!!!!! WOW!
    This is extraordinary!
    Unique, Beautiful, Meek,
    Strong, loving......ect.
    I can just keep going
    on and on!
    :hot: :hot: :hot: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
    I guess you can tell I loved it! HUH? :huh: :D
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :laugh: hee hee.....

    You know Purple, you paid me a compliment yesterday on your own thread that I have to give back to you now. Your posts always soothe me and your words make me feel wonderful. Thanks so much for the love, and for feelin me. Much love back to you. I appreciate your work.
     
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    most welcome gempis my sistah
     
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    That was beautiful much love to you and your work is amazing:wink:
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aw, thank you so much, Sensual Reality, that means a lot to me. Much love to you.
     
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