Black Poetry : EX-iting

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Heartbeat, Sep 24, 2002.

  1. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    maby it's the kids
    maby it's the money
    maby it's the sex
    some folks just can't go away
    still in your mind
    there is no ex

    ex-wives
    ex-husbands
    my ex- man
    my ex-woman
    the're always around
    for something or another
    no such thing as an ex-lover

    life and love
    relationships
    heart sharing
    soul sharing
    stretching a body thin
    exhausting
    so complex
    ain't no such thing
    as an ex

    be
    (c) 2002
     
  2. elayne.

    elayne. Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    mr edwards.


    now! you sho done said a mind-full with this
    one right heah! mmm mmm mmm... you had
    to have been readin' my thoughts!!

    anyway...

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
  3. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    man why didn't nobody else respond
    this was funny and true

    and i'm glad i read it


    DSS

    LLLOOOOOOOOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
     
  4. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I'm feelin' this piece of sho'nuff truth. :)


    Coco :heart:
     
  5. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you Poets for feeling this here.

    be
     
  6. Gaylee

    Gaylee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MMM! BE, You do write so TRUE about it ALL. Very observant and intuitive. I can fully relate.
     
  7. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    That first verse spoke to me... cuz if they still in yo mind ... it ain't ova! Love it when you bring it with such candor AND humor, BE!

    :)

    alyce
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wooweee! BE.....
    man ya sho nuff on da money
    ex- who !
    no sucha thang when he/she
    still on ya brain

    can she be my has been then !? lol.
     
  9. Heartbeat

    Heartbeat Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My "Has Been"...now there's an interesting one. Much, much different from an Ex. Thanks for the thought RICH.

    be
     
  10. wildflower7

    wildflower7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    SHO
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    RIIIIIGHT!
    -7:spinstar:
     
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