Black Poetry : Ex.climax.ion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by angelicsage, Jul 7, 2003.

  1. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Saddling into an insatiable unite,
    I’ve known you…
    So I hold on tight
    And we begin…
    Drifting sensual forevers within a canvasy twilight

    The moment before, my body? You so stormily…ignite.

    Calla-Lilly silhouettes dance in horizontal intimacies
    Repetition of this flame, traveling in ivy like intricacy
    And I? Can only pray for I am consumed by carnal iniquities
    Surrounding laden sexual perplexities

    Nothing in me, for you? Is extinguishable.

    Enthralled by the tenderness of your touch
    Yet
    Equally enslaved by the virility of your clutch.
    You have me!
    Complete
    Totality

    My midnight redeemer…I am wakeless
    As you baptize me in temptatious salvation
    Stimulating irrigation
    The damns of my body………Breaking, Weeping…Tears
    Deep polarizations of penetrating vibrations
    Now… provoke me to

    Ex-climax-ion!

    And you know………………you have me!
    Exclamation!


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  2. Sierra

    Sierra Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hi angelicasage,

    WOW!! This is a tyte flow!! I like it very much!!

    ~Sierra~:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    and u know u have me !
    wow!
    tyte scribe angelic
     
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    the_story Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh my god dis is hot!!!!
    wheww!!im smokin gurl!!
     
  5. Quinessential1

    Quinessential1 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My sage... wonderful and delightful as you take flight...can I touch your wings?

    I swim in YOUR flow.
     
  6. Clio_the_Muze

    Clio_the_Muze Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ex-climax-ion....I LOVE a good play on words.... let me tell you. Your flow is very intimate, delicate. I like the way it plays on the ears. Very nice, I like it a lot.

    Thanks 4 Sharing
     
  7. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sierra, Always happy to see u...Thanks for the words...so glad u liked it!

    Rich, As always, Big Thanks, coming from the Godfather of Poetic Love from above!

    The story...Hot u say? ...Why yes he "is" quite hot. Thanks for dropping me a line!

    Q,essential...Swimming in my flow...anytime! Much luv to u...Oh, and the wings? with your words...u did.

    Clio - Glad to see someone appreciates a good play on words...I see we're on the same page...Happy to have u in the Fam!
     
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