Black Poetry : ewreckshun ... "sin freestyled me"

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  1. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    is there a three way connection
    between my mind, my pen, and your erection?
    mental menage'trois' takin place/
    with satin ink, silky thoughts and the words that I lace/
    are you seeing my felt tip visions/ trying to make decisions/
    to breathe and stop/ or let me lick the top...of your
    erection//

    this pen strokes directions
    ink blot injections
    that have you sayin' my name in VEIN
    overdosing on poetic cocaine
    licks that reverse the effects of
    muscle relaxants
    "Aye Mami".... moans in your puerto rican accent
    touches that talk to temptation
    two bodies in fluent converstation
    motions of me riding your mind
    straddlin' your thoughts and hittin' me from behind

    if i get too deep on you
    several erections may creep up on you
    so i'll let you dismantle your body
    from your mind
    just concentrate on
    the verbal grind of my hips
    deep sucks from tight lips
    that slip on top of your
    erection

    where is your erection?
    maybe i'll call on it to cum
    perhaps moan it into existance
    then sip it down like a smooth buttered rum...
    should i come closer/ or
    shall i entertain your mind from here?/
    would you prefer me to mouth the words/
    or lightly tongue them in your ear?/

    i'll sink past pen~eye~tration/
    wet you way beyond saturation/
    bringing reality to your
    reflections of
    an imagined
    erection




    (c) 2001 SOULOFASISTA
     
  2. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I have heard tell

    of a direct correlation between the mind, the pen and the wonder~filled...erection....

    well...

    a
     
  3. GYPSYMAN

    GYPSYMAN Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HMMMMmmmmmmmmmmmmmm............

    Wickedly
    delicious
    I am left
    speechless
    BUT
    full
    of
    rated-X
    actually
    triple
    X
    unknown
    pro/I GROW/down low
    nouns
    found
    through
    imaginary
    wanderings
    wondering
    how u
    sound
    when
    the perfect
    pen
    sends
    u
    extends
    new
    twists
    over old
    bounds
    butt-naked
    wordz
    usually
    exempt
    find me
    tempt-ed
    to
    c l o w n
    down
    D
    E
    E
    P
    between
    scribe
    between
    thighs
    between
    the folds
    of
    your
    "climac-tic"

    ......sighs.

    :eek:




    On A Continuous Journey
    g-man
     
  4. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the pen...

    sure is mightier than the sword when wielded with such precision..

    K
     
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    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Daayumm...

    that was cute...that was cute.

    there must be a connection coz just thinking about where you were taking this caused an...........anyway, that was cute.:)
     
  6. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sustah A

    Yeah gurl, and I too have heard tell about that same thang... that's why I just had to go on & write about it! :wink:

    :lol:

    Thanks sustah friend!
     
  7. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Gypsyman

    Mmmmm. I shoulda known you would of "hit" me up with a "cum" back on this piece....

    Sensually Yourz...

    N2

    Gracias amigo :heart:
     
  8. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Kitana

    Sounds like the pen is mightier than the ewreckshun too... :lol:


    Thanks for the read!

    One Luv.
     
  9. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey -- whatcha' self now! :lol:

    Baller -- I might just have to brush up against you in a thought to see how hard that ____________ getz? (ooops!) :kiss:


    Just jokez, but thanks for the read!
    Glad you enjoyed!
     
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    klabarron Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot! really hot!! whewww!!