Black Poetry : ~Evolve~

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Mind~$oul, Oct 22, 2003.

  1. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    not sure if i posted this here before. Just a lil funny poem i wrote...

    Based On A True Story...


    let
    two hearts
    evolve...

    as one
    together
    me
    you
    shall stand tall...

    nothing
    will ever
    come between
    us
    our love
    is too strong
    for
    anything
    to break
    us
    up

    lets
    make love
    until we sweat
    oceans...
    both
    bodies
    sticky, icky
    bed mattress
    soakened...
    let me
    taste
    your sweetness
    drink
    your wetness
    until you shower me
    with your
    sensuality
    multi
    multi
    multi
    sshhh baby dont
    scream...
    cause it's more sexy
    listening to you
    breathe deep for me
    innnn
    ouuut
    the sound
    of
    esctasy...

    let two hearts
    evolve

    as one
    together
    you
    bonnie
    me
    cylde
    you
    juliet
    me
    romeo
    until death do we part
    engraved in
    our tombstone...

    your beauty
    too
    intricate...
    for a
    god to
    duplicate...

    cupid whispered
    elegance...
    was her middle
    name...

    pouring
    honey on
    your
    honey
    skin tone
    arousing
    my manhood
    each
    time
    you moan

    until suddenly a
    ring comes from
    the
    phone
    and you say
    "baby you gotta go!"

    i ask
    why?
    she says
    "my moms on the way home"

    let
    two hearts
    evolve

    **** heffa
    gave
    me
    blue balls!
     
  2. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Mind~$oul,....this was overflowing with volcanic
    eruptions of lavalike passion....

    what a journey...

    and what an interestingly cute ending, lol

    enjoyed the flow!
     
  3. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i love this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    str8 awesome the realm i felt ....wow
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was so tight...much love
     
  6. Mind~$oul

    Mind~$oul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love

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