Black Poetry : Evolution

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by emrod89, Aug 6, 2003.

  1. emrod89

    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    Will you meet me in my hollow place
    Where my shadows stand watch,
    Silent and grim?
    We can sit and have tea--
    The lightness of the scones and conversation will push the shadows by.
    I can pretend you love me.

    Will you decorate my hollow place
    Where I crouch cold in corners,
    Shuddering scared?
    You can hold me quiet--
    The tenderness and strength you bring will soothe this hurting child.
    Maybe somehow you'll love me.

    Will you explore with me my hollow place
    Where lights flicker distant,
    Beckoning bright?
    I can take your hands--
    The happiness I feel with you will laugh cobwebs aside.
    I'll discover how you love me.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    it's great when we can see the true love given
    it feel so good u mastered this to perfection
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yr words are very inviting and intriguing.
     
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    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Nicely flow'd!
    Thanks for sharing.

    feelin'it souldeep
    Coco :heart:
     
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    Alkebulan Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    that was sooooooooooo touching & warm.

    u hv a new fan :toast:
     
  6. emrod89

    emrod89 Active Member MEMBER

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    awww... thanks, ya'll. the appreciation is appreciated. :)
     
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