Black Poetry : Evils of Society

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  1. PlayWitItPimp05

    PlayWitItPimp05 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How can you even look at me
    And tell me I commit forgery?
    your eyes penetrate
    and your words slap my face
    Break my nose
    and black my eye I
    try everything in willpower not to cry
    How dare you lie?
    And make life seem like a worthless, ruthless game?
    How can you lie to me?
    When I look around and all I see
    IS LOVE.
    How dare you try to take that away?
    There is nothing you can do or say
    To make my heart fade away
    My trust and love for another.
    You try to make it seem like there is no other
    When I know better
    You simply make my flow, my soul, wetter
    You quench my thirst
    Although I often feel my heart will burst
    You see
    I have to learn reality
    That is only my destiny.
    You simply have to put trust in me.
    I've been mentally shattered
    Throughout my whole life
    Putting up
    With tons of heartache and strife
    Like a fruit with no juice in it's
    Life, I refuse
    to let you crush my heart
    tear me apart
    and leave me back at the start
    Because nothing could give me
    Or change the things I believe in
    breathe for
    and think for
    NOT MY RELIGION.
    I refuse to try "living again."
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ****...this holds so much emotion...i'm lovin' it
     
  3. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very tyte flow!... i felt ya :)... thankx for sharing!

    peace
     
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    ASHANTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Words written from a master I am really feeling this .
     
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