Black Poetry : Everytime

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  1. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everytime your presence
    Is near
    You make my silent heart sing

    Although I'm so shy
    When I talk to you
    My eagerness
    Briskly fades away
    By the sound of your
    Voice so deep

    My confidence
    And my boldness
    Leaves me
    Standing
    All by myself

    Some may say I'm foolish
    But I'm guessing
    That this common interest

    I would have never guessed
    You would have shared

    The words I say
    Get all jumbled up
    And mixed up inside

    They barely come out of my mouth
    And can barely talk

    But you set my soul and heart free
    Whenever you are near

    Everytime
    You respond
    Everytime
    You are so clear
    Everytime
    You bother me
    You tease me
    With you eyes
    And you do it
    With so much skill

    Everytime

    Desert Storm
     
  2. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Str8....

    from your heart DS...I felt this one gurl!

    Thanks for sharing it!!
     
  3. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    fresh love...

    pulling at the heart strings. PASSIONATELY.

    speak this.
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    STORMY.....

    umm hmmm!... communicate wit him den lil sis!! :wink:

    i can dig it!!... but then again you know dat!!

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
  5. Desert Storm

    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Firstly,

    N2URSOUL,you be there for a sista,like a true friend first of all. You seem to amaze me each and every time I read ya. Feelin ya all the time,even if at times it goes unspoken. I just thought you should know that gurl. You are so true. Stay sweet. Don't ever change for nobody.
    Desert Storm
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ~Baller~

    Hmmm,well,what can I say? You give me hope ma brotha. Thank you.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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    Desert Storm Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sunshyne,Sunshyne,Sunshyne

    You are the hope light and the life. You are so true and ferverent. I like you spirit. I can tell you are such a nice loyal human being and lovely person to be around. You give me that extra mustard seed strength. You are so true and dear. Loving your ways gurl.
    Sincerely,
    Desert Storm
     
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