Black Poetry : Everything

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Dec 1, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everything

    The passion that is unleashed with the touch of your lips to mine…It is nothing short of pure carnal pleasure.
    I dream about it, I feel it in my soul…It is for you I have waited my entire life.
    You release me from myself, but yet keep yourself distant from me
    Your joy comes from my happiness
    Your body and soul speak to me as if we are one.
    We share in one another’s abundance freely
    All the while knowing that this will soon come to an end.
    This love, OUR love is carried through heavy whispers in the air.
    When we are together, we are at peace….
    When we are apart, there is chaos
    What are we? What do we mean? Why us? I beg.
    The simple answer of “EVERYTHING” spills from your lips.
    That one simple word sums up towers of passion and emotion
    Amazing … don’t you think?
    Your “Everything” echo’s through my mind and pierces my heart.
    Our love is one that is silent; it lulls me to sleep at night, and wakes me in the morning.
    I live to feel your heat and wonder what it would be like to own it.
    You have a fire that captivates but can’t be contained.
    Your freedom is your refuge; it is what keeps you safe.
    Safe from the hurt that true love brings.
    It hurts to know that you won’t feel safe with my love,
    But who am I?
    I’ve poured my soul into yours, never to be replenished.
    I waited and wondered, with no answers, so your “EVERYTHING”
    Becomes nothing to me but an empty word…..
    I have a safe place for you, and one day you will find it
    But when you find it, you won’t want it.
    You won’t trust me to own your heart and keep it safe
    So, as it stands your “EVERYTHING” is really NOTHING
    And NOTHING hurts far more than EVERYTHING!!

    12//012003

    Thankyou for the lovemy destee family!
     
  2. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is sweet..
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful
    roll with it poet of the week:rolling:
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    alright my man tyte scribe
    flow on poet of the week !!!!!
     
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    oh i like
    flow on poet of the week
     
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    PositiveMindset Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooooohhh!

    Bittersweet piece.

    Brother, I just wanna take this lady and shake some sense into her, tell her WAKE UP!!!

    This was soo nice.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The feelings of warmth and care are all over this poem. Flow on, poet of the week!!!
     
  8. Was it Just us

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    Wow this is truly good..........I like that it is one that has feeling and makes you feel with each line. Keep doing what you do...
     
  9. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I guess this just proves a point she can be given "Everything" and it will mean "Nothing" if it's not right. LOL
    Thank you my family you have graced my soul with your love.
     
  10. triniti424

    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    or it could mean her "everything" wasnt even enough for your caramelpython "something" so that amounts to "nothing" lol
    poet of the week on a blaze up in here :)
     
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