Black Poetry : Everything within everything (revised)

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Everything within everything (repost revised)

    Everything within everything
    Just shows one thing…
    within the mind of an
    artist lacing words
    and drawing a picture
    that captures ones mind
    opening the horizion and
    the vision is clear
    of a poet to release....
    POETRY
    Art
    Creations of
    A thought
    Evolved of
    Feeling
    Uplifting
    Sounding of
    Notions
    Within motion
    CREATIVITY
    Of a voice that rings
    within side

    ***************
    Poetry
    In all its forms,
    focus on the inner soul
    Taking your mind
    to a level of
    imagination that
    no other can hold
    And there you find
    pleasure to
    release all that’s felt.
    It speaks of truth,
    it tells the story
    of lost souls that
    creeps in the dark, and
    opens the heart for
    love that sings in the light
    It edges off the energy
    one wishes to give
    but fear not to spread,
    And art in all its
    forms nothing more
    to add for the words
    speak for themselves
    Opening a world of wonder!

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
    copyright
     
  2. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Read it people... read it, everything is deeper than we will see it if we dont try to explore it's roots. Angel I loved this drop, thanks!
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramelpython...I agree with you 100 percent, sometimes it takes more than reading what one says...sometimes we have to hear them.
    that's deep scribing...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    indeed indeed indeed
    the master craft of
    da heart speaking out
    from the clash of a
    past to a notion flowin
    taken in capture and
    made grade A
    the inner emotions
    leak out to canvas
    to be hit like bombshall
    this was on point and
    much of what i am saying
    deep piece
    hope all read the message this bring ....wow!!
    angel i really enjoyed reading this here .........
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This flowed from a poet's soul, and it was felt.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you family....
    Peace and love
    Angel
     
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    Like a drummer
    You form a beat
    And lay it on paper
    Flowing with vibes
    Within side the mind
    Releasing it
    Through ink
    As it hits the canvas
    It penetrates the mind
    Placing a wonder of thoughts
    That can induce
    Shock
    Heat
    Love
    Pain
    Joy
    Tingles of fulfillment……
    Or a simple smile
    Like a drummer
    Performing for the
    very first time
    just a vision of a
    thought released
    of a inner soul
    poerty in all its forms
    feeds the mind and
    embraces hearts....
     
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    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :angel1: even revised it's deep u go angel drop the ink on us.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the love and support
     
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    you compose a lovely
    scribe to poetry
    nice one
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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