Black Poetry : Everything is fine

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dream Weaver, Mar 26, 2003.

  1. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am so tired
    tired of trying to be the one
    fatigue has overwhelmed my persistence
    the sweat on my brow burns my eyes
    so much that my soul got blind
    my mind now runs concurrent with your heart
    now everything is fine
    I don’t need you to need me
    Even if I want to have you
    Fifty-one-eight-four-hundred
    That’s every minute of every day
    Of yesteryear multiplied by a life time
    Every day for the rest of my life
    --I found my anti-you
    and its my heart in a bottle
    poured down the drain
    now for you I feel no pain
    penitent am I for taking your time
    reparation I’ll serve for going out of line
    I hope one day to look at you and smile
    Today it hurts to even cry
    these are not tears on my cheeks
    they’re raindrops from the heartache in the sky
    didn’t you know?
    When you can’t, mother nature cries…
     
  2. StarGoddess

    StarGoddess Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    man...

    i have been there......

    this was nice work....i like the way it flowed out.....

    **heartborken**
    :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss: :kiss:
     
  3. thepoetsean

    thepoetsean Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a killa piece!
    way to step it up.
    WAY UP!!!

    dreamwaever.kickinitupanotch.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    i know dis so well been their too
    feel u here ...............tyght
     
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