Black Poetry : Everything (exerpt)

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  1. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I will be your LIFE,
    your Birth Mother,
    first knitted cover.
    The cutter of your cord,
    first doctor,
    I will be your Sister AND your Brother.
    You'll know no other
    LOVE LIKE THIS....
    I'll be the first time you reminisce...
    Your favorite teacher, the preacher
    that baptized your head,
    the first word you said,
    I will be the hand by which you fed.
    The first to love you,
    the first you'll hate.
    The only one who ever will relate...
    The arms that hold you,
    the hold that keeps you,
    the cry that weeps for you.
    The happiness that makes you smile,
    I will be there with you all the while.
    I'll be oyur lonely,
    your not at ease,
    your comfort in the breeze,
    your friends your enemies...
    I"LL BE
    your bare essential,
    so monumental,
    the life event that made you hard,
    the touch, the kiss that made you so gentle.
    I am the one you knew before,
    every ounce of Liquyd that you pour...

    I AM forever,
    your ever every
    your everything
    the rhythm that you sing
    the air you breathe into the life you bring
    in any wheather you'll be my King
    and I remain your ever everything...


    Liquydated Sound 2003/ASCAP
     
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    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This piece encompassed everything you could ever wish to be to someone you love...beautiful work! Liquyd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    the depth of dis kinda love
    imbedded in da heart and flows
    into a soul
    tyte scribe
     
  4. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you sage. I was one day sitting and thinking about how people say a person is their 'everything'. I thought to myself 'what would it be to TRULY be EVERYTHING to someone, that's SOOOOOO much more than the average person can be to you......
     
  5. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    It's such a deep love I couldn't contain it within one verse:


    I'm your reflection
    A rare connection
    Woman to Man
    A soul to understand
    That other set of footprints in the sand
    Also your shadow
    your deepest night
    I'm always on your side and your reflection in the fight.
    Your morning after, your day before,
    I AM YOUR CORE
    The center of your being calls me,
    I will be the one to give you more.
    I'll show you softness,
    I'll take it rough,
    just until I get enough,
    SWEAR I'll never get enough.
    Cause I'm your Daddy
    your little Mama
    your daily drama
    The place you lay your head,
    I am your home, and in your trauma
    I will bring you peace
    I AM your release.
    I will be your angel, baby
    I can be a beast.
    Your 'all or nothin'
    'On me for life'
    I will be your wife, your girl,
    even that ***** you call a 'friend'
    and then in the end...
    I will be there all over again.

    I AM forever
    your ever every
    your everything
    the rhythm that you sing
    the air you breathe into the life you bring
    in any wheather
    you'll be my King
    and I remain your ever everything.

    Liquydated Sound/ASCAP
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    King & Queen
    a love in bond
    under the blazing sun
    everything one can wish
    so it's seal wit a kiss
    in da motion of two
    ummmm! yeap me & u

    felling flow in da air
    as i fly my flyte
    this piece sho nuff tyteeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!
     
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    skrybe7 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I AM forever,
    your ever every
    your everything
    the rhythm that you sing
    the air you bring into the life you bring
    in any wheather you'll be my King
    and I remain your ever everything...

    This is mad tyte.
    feelin' your flow, Poet
     
  8. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    beautiful scribe...
     
  9. liquyd

    liquyd Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks for the LOVE y'all!

    'The air you BREATHE into the life you bring', lol I mess that line up on the mic too...
     
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    everything is everything...
    you gots sum ill lyrical skill
    keep flowin...
    peace
    khasm
     
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