Khasm13 : everybody...(trying to get womens perspectives)

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  1. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    everybody wants da supastar
    with da deuce deuces on da car
    bling blinging at da bar
    you may not want him now
    but at one time you did
    a cat so cool dat when he walked
    it looked like he slid
    dats why he was over your crib
    unscrewing dat tight lid
    of your favorite jar
    yes this same cat from da bar
    remember he those had ill green gators
    a platinum piece
    with a medallion of an elevator
    tightly trimmed beard and mustache
    and a mesmerizing laugh
    looking like he’s on the right path
    cause the way he was going
    he had mad loot
    conscious brotha to boot
    just look at his zoot suit
    dis cat is sky high
    needing a parachute
    gotz people jumping backwards thru loops
    dat are on fire
    cause everybody desires
    da biggest liars

    im trying to get some info on dis topic
    so if you feel it drop it
     
  2. lilcherry76

    lilcherry76 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    What I Think

    great piece,
    like the one he had.
    this cat must've been a playa,
    and if he ain't my bad.
    cuz this flow is tight,
    sistah's all over the world crampin his style.
    and that's how these females,
    end up with child...........(i feel u, big time):toast:
     
  3. redlady

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    khasm, i liked this piece...the imagry was really good, but i never was one for those country-*** bright color wearing conk *** nuccas. on the other hand...the flow was tite!
     
  4. Khasm13

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    i wanna know
    what ya'll feel about these cats
    in a flow...
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    cat's like dis in a fix
    sliding mad mix
    yeah! every chick up on it
    but do it fit now wit it
    playas like dis roam da room
    feelin cool
    but ladies now know da rule
    what! he just foolin
    loot lofty in gear
    pocket hang calling names
    just a big cross up liar
    to get his groove higher
    back off step aside dis a
    one way ride ...................tyte scribe

    man cat's like dis can't get far for the moment
    sure til the sista see the myth of his beings
    we have a lot of sistas hittin joints to fine that
    suga daddy who ain't ready but want the fast hit
    then split lie /fool her to get da groove but in the
    end his butt will lose ....ladies need to wake up !
    playas playas playas!!!
     
  6. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    ---cindy
    i'm so sorry that you had to go through that
    no one deserves that :(
    i have to say though...this is one of the tyter
    scribes that i have seen from you
    this is the real deal my goodness
    you are truely talented
    my jaw dropped when i read this piece
    and believe me that dosent happen much(hardly at all)
    *in awe*

    rich
    you are so right my brotha
    snakes in da garden
    i'm going to drop so more pieces on dis thread
    but i just had to thank to and cindy
    for blessing this piece...cause i really
    want to know how women feel about these cats

    peace my epic poets
    khasm
     
  7. Monetary

    Monetary going above and beyond PREMIUM MEMBER

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    Khasm13

    As always bruh...nice...dapz.

    Tight flow...good topic. Lay it down, bruh...lay it down.

    :thanks: for sharing

    :toast:


    Dang, ya'll just layin' it down up in here.

    :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown: :bowdown:
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    LESSONS FOR THE LOVE MONKEY

    Well first of all Khasm, I love the ways of your pen. Your style is a throwback of The Cool. Secondly, we know from observing the barnyard pimp that it's all about attitude when it comes to the selective reproduction process. Peace!
     
  9. Khasm13

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    thanks supa poet...
    love monkey haha ha ha...
    your a trip man
    peace
    khasm
     
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    Ya see, I never had love for the man with all the loot.
    I like the simple ones with the wife beaters and timberland boots.
    I don't want no gator shoe wearing chump.
    The one that can smile at most women and then they give him what he wants.
    I want a man that will talk sh** on Sundays watching the Bears.
    Someone who's cool as hell, no matter what he wears.
    He'll command respect just by his good nature and strong pressence.
    And at all times he'll love me for my true essence.
    Indeed, I don't need a man with millions of dollars,
    but I don't need a man living at home with his mama.
    But at the same time, if you do live with you ol' girl.
    Don't lie about it, it's not the end of the world.
    I just need to know you have true ambition.
    If that's so, I'm there for you with no hesitaton!
     
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