Black Poetry : every waking moment

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  1. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My dreams are about you
    A recap of the nights we spent together
    the days i am apart from you
    every waking moment

    My day dreams are about you
    they seem so real
    i tend to drift away from reality
    every waking moment

    I wake to the sweet soultrie sound of your southern eccented voice
    or wake up far before you do to only wake you up to your breakfast cooking on the stove
    in my dreams we have so much
    every waking moment

    i appreciate all that you are
    that you can offer to this suburban girl
    every waking moment i think of how i can include you

    your movements that send these stampedes through my heart
    at first it was lust
    tons of it
    i could feel it from you and for you
    every waking moment

    then it all changed in an instant
    like you added milk to my bowl of dry instant cream of wheat
    heating it up over your open fire
    creating a dish any one starving for love would throughly appreciate
    every waking moment i took a bit

    every waking moment i wanted more
    more you
    more of that feeling you gave me in the pit of my stomach
    more of me
    more that us
    every waking moment
    movement
    adornment
    love

    what i can offer you every waking moment
    is me
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very sweet scribe poet ya pen is maxin it to perfection
     
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    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    does that mean you're in heavenly bliss 24-7 ???...wow that a :luvv:
    to feel that way about someone on a daily basics is so wonderful.
    I really enjoyed reading this piece.
     
  4. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you rich

    its been a while but im back
    thank you my brother rich
    i've my new inspirations.
    moving so fast that this art now is a need to exhale and release some of this pressure off my heart and soul...
    ~1
     
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    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is for nathan

    my love making my heart rejoice
     
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    Beautiful Work...

    I applaud you!

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  8. GeneticSoul

    GeneticSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankyou my sista
     
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    A heavenly bliss you can't shake, this was smoothly written.
     
  10. j'hiah

    j'hiah Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey now this one's caught my eye, and l shall await more :coffee:

    nfinite,,

    jh.
     
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