Black Poetry : Every Time She Kissed Me

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every time she kissed me,
    my days stood still as if
    mesmerized and my nights
    became so much more

    h~e~a~v~e~n~l~y
    while I lay in her company

    Hours upon hours we spent in
    enchanted ecstasy;
    paining from pleasures
    past and futures yet to be

    Every time she kissed me,
    my body trembled in warm
    anticipation of her slightest
    touch

    m~a~j~e~s~t~i~c~a~l~l~y
    the feeling is in close harmony

    Passionate but tender moments
    of
    Cloud 9 Love
    fascinated us
    endlessly…to the point of

    t
    e
    a
    r
    s


    though they were simply
    cries
    of
    joy

    Every time she kissed me,
    she reminded me that my heart
    ached with sincere love for her

    m~o~r~t~a~l~l~y
    wounding us both to our depths

    Her kisses have become
    d~e~a~d~l~y
    to my soul

    ©GQINC2K3
     
  2. Bishop

    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Man you be awesome!!!!!Simply Awesome!!!!
     
  3. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    see I thought you said you would never

    :kiss: and tell....... but ummmm I like the way you :kiss: my mental




    One
     
  4. j'hiah

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    the master of wordplay has struck again :jawdrop:
     
  5. poeticdelight

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    tight flow GQ

    keep writing

    :toast:
     
  6. Euphoria

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    You write so emotionally, it's beautiful.
    I really love this peace.

    *Emma*
     
  7. Sista Steele

    Sista Steele Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Ooo no, not deadly. Very romantic GQ.
     
  8. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is awesome...and the ending was nothing short of spectacular...love this one...

    K
     
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    Yall done know Jersey got madd skills! for real
     
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