Black Poetry : "Every Thing good"

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Lips2yours, Apr 4, 2004.

  1. Lips2yours

    Lips2yours Member MEMBER

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    :book: "Every thing good"

    Every thing good that could ever come your way,

    is what I always wish for you every single day.

    A smile for you I carry so deep down in my heart,

    a prayer for you I whisper, before the morning starts.


    my lips to yours, as does the ocean to the shore,


    the glistening dreams in your eyes,


    makes me want you even more.


    A tale of love once found,

    is the secret and the key,

    thru everything good that happens to


    you....... also happens to me.



    Trevette Brown

    Copyright ©2004 Trevette Brown



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    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wonderful flow
    very lovely wow:)
    Peace
    BlueWater:heart:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    how this drip to canvas lovin it
    flow on poet scribe it all out
    tyte
     
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    Welcome Back Home Sister Lips2yours

    Very Nice Flow
    Sincere and well composed.

    Keep sharing
     
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    Oh, my! :bowdown:

    This felt like a beautiful Spring day in a field of Dandelions with a soft breeze!

    This made me feel LIGHT and warm and fuzzy! (smile)

    Great piece! The poignancy and imagery in this is fabulous! :toast:
     
  6. LISTERSCRIBIN'

    LISTERSCRIBIN' Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dear poetess...

    i really enjoyed this lovepiece...very nicely written. keep scribin', it's beautiful!
     
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