Black Poetry : Every Thang

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  1. Flyy baby luv

    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    See,
    I dream about you every day and every night
    I wanna feel your touch cause it seems so right
    I wanna b your everythang
    Otha chicks, they come and go
    but I'm here 2 stay so you'll always know
    I'm your every thang

    I told you once I told you twice
    not olny love but I give good advice

    My love is tru and manifests n u
    A simple touth will make it through,
    I'm so n love
    n love with u
    my every thang

    Forget the past cause I'm your history
    your futures locked but I'm the key
    I'm everythang

    From Chocolate so sweet 2, Ice cream that will make you shiver down
    2 your feet
    I'm all you want
    so just taste me now
    I'm everythang

    Don't b shy, just let out a sigh
    this love we share will neva die
    cause I'm every thang

    The window 2 your soul are not my hips but my eyes
    Do u c your life in me
    Everythang u have is free
    If only u believe I'm your everythang

    I c it n the middle of your mind u r mine
    n my heart u r defined as my everythang

    Everythang what a big word
    What r u thinking about
    Your past where u u said
    neva... would u...

    well just think about your future cause I'm yours 4 eva more
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    so beautifully expressed wow !!
    happy u here scribing upon us
    coz u flowed a sweet release here
     
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    Flyy baby luv Member MEMBER

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    wow I really appreciate, that I really love your work
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u from my top flyte & heart
    flow on as i read u yours a eye catcher
    as well let the ink run most welcome
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was sweetly expressed. Welcome to Destee!!!
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this was nicely laid...
    flow on
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Woo! This is tight! Welcome, Flyy baby luv - lookin forward to seein more of ya scribes.
     
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