Black Poetry : Every morning

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by PolyBeauty, Sep 23, 2003.

  1. PolyBeauty

    PolyBeauty New Member MEMBER

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    3 AM
    every
    morning

    I hear a voice

    low

    in the dark
    (puh puh puh pulsating)
    grrrrrrroaning-
    rrrrrrrroaming.

    and I wonder if You're listening?
    to it?

    up

    if it keeps You up,

    tired and creeping
    (creaking and wired)

    With it's shadowy sounds of NOTHING
    shadowy

    like SILENT howls.

    up

    There's comfort in imagining you're up

    staring at W
    A
    L
    L
    S

    Wondering if I'm listening to the same voice of insomnia.
    listening
    listening

    while everyone sleeps
    while everyone dreams
    of what it must be like
    to be awake.
     
  2. PolyBeauty

    PolyBeauty New Member MEMBER

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    Well, it didn't post properly. It's supposed to be spaced differently, but I guess the website automatically eraces certain spaces.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    welcome welcome welcome !!!!

    welcome to destee.com poetic playground
    welcome to the family of love & bond
    welcome from above as i bless u some love
    dis was very tyte scribe happy u stepped in !:)
    u kin now welcome :D
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    flow on ya pen in motion polyBeauty welcome
    look around and enjoy
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    welcome to destee.com
    i like your flow...
    dont worry about the spacin..
    just flow and have fun...
     
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    HODEE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PolyBeauty
    Welcome to Destee.

    It is readable and well posed. Keep flowing
     
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