Black Poetry : Every Man Brings A Poem

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Hunter, Dec 13, 2001.

  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every man brings a poem
    So the women
    Gently sing
    Their songs
    By the riverside
    While they scrub
    Men's
    Under-things
    And
    Every river
    Tells a story
    Of love notes
    Under-clothes
    Where a woman
    Sheds
    Her water
    For the man
    That brings a poem


    Hunter
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  2. poeticdelight

    poeticdelight Member MEMBER

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    whoa!

    now this was deep

    nice job


    pd
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!

    u when down deep inside and came up
    a winner here.....:heart: :eek: :kiss:
     
  4. alyce

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    my sista, my sista

    it is my firm belief that whether it's pain or pleasure, the one who can't bring "flow"....gots to go! :wink:

    speak it like you know you know....

    a
     
  5. Mr marion

    Mr marion Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as simple as that

    Alyce said it!..
    Tight flow hunter
     
  6. MsDLite

    MsDLite Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    awesome...

    ...sis!

    woman shedding her water...
    for man...

    loved the message~
     
  7. dnommo

    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    but the poem every man
    brings is written on the
    hearts that rest along
    the riverside washing
    their things as he sits back
    and smiles as her sonnets
    sings songs of love to his
    heart....

    your piece is tight as usual...they are reviving my pen...
     
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    Bishop Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter, you took me there!! I'm waiting for more....
     
  9. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hunter,

    Very nice flo.

    Madd Holiday Greetings :heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
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    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    Hunter

    nice deep polar piece

    yes no doubts


    >DSSNY<
     
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