Black Poetry : *~Every bruise has a story 2 tell!!~*

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  1. BlatinaPoet4u

    BlatinaPoet4u Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Every bruise has a different story
    Another night of drunken glory
    She can't help but think what did I do
    She loves him every beat of her heart
    Somehow she believes he loves her too
    Than he comes home drunk one night
    All he wants to do is fight
    He hits her so hard she falls to the ground
    The pain is so sharp she can hardly breathe
    Now the blood is all around
    He screams a little more
    Gives her one swift kick in the ribs
    This isn't right she knows that for sure
    She goes to work the next day with her shades on
    And shirts to cover the bruisies on her arm
    She thinks one more day can't do any harm
    Days turn to weeks and weeks into years
    Everytime someone touches her they're sure to hit sore spot
    Now she does all she can do to hide the tears
    People notice that something is wrong
    They just don't want to get involved
    They shrug it off and say she's strong
    Everyone tried to help one day too late
    He beat her so much death is now her fate!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow this was awesome love the flow
     
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    very nice flow i enjoyed the read....Angel
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yes, every bruise had a story, but none paid enough attention until...Such a sorrowful tale, emotively brought.
     
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