Black Poetry : Evergreen...[November trilogy #2]

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  1. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Evergreen

    I think of you
    Sometimes
    And it is
    November

    With the beauty
    Of Autumn leaves
    Still falling
    Onto ground

    And naked trees
    Whisper
    The coming of
    Winter

    I ignore
    The voice of Oak
    And revel in red,
    Orange, yellow,
    Brown

    I love you
    Even though
    The leaves
    Are falling

    And bark
    Stands barren
    To face the snow

    The beauty
    Of November
    Leaves me
    Wanting

    The evergreen
    Forest

    Where my love
    For you
    Continues to
    Grow


    Hunter
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  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    sometimes

    we reach out for something, only to find it's no longer there...

    then we ask ourselves..was it ever really there..did it come to stay for just a little while and then go..is it still there, hiding underneath ..or did I only imagine it...and it never really was...

    if I go back and re-read the pages of my life..will I find you there..

    K
     
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    Hunter...

    This was a very nice visual read....

    Epiphany :heart:
     
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    again...

    you bring to me the special-ness of autumn. The colorful leaves, and what they signify in nature....I find, is where I am in the forest... in the autumn of my life.... this November....clinging fast to love, evergrowing and evergreen.

    thank you

    a
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very well said

    lovin the colourful spray u pose here:)
     
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    you have entered the meadow and spread your wings to lay freely in the piles of fallen leaves. I welcome you and this scribe that brings me peace this morning...
     
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