Black Poetry : Even The Walls Cry Out…(from A Tarheel Poet's master series)

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  1. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    even the walls cry out

    ….cause they recognize intensity
    your splendid form (I become intent to see)
    feeling passion’s propensity
    to fit itself around us
    in a glove

    even the walls cry out

    ….cause love has many splendors
    tender traces and streams
    of the most erotic appeal
    ultimately called on in dreams to help us deal
    with those nights
    when we’re both alone
    but succulent visions and recalled moans
    carry us miles from home
    back to each other

    even the walls cry out

    ….cause being your lover
    effects me in magnetic ways
    radiating an energy
    of lust, romance, devotion
    transfused to all those things surrounding me
    I can’t define the emotion---
    but basically it’s
    mind & body/heart & soul
    combined and entwined
    into a union divine
    shockwaves climb the full length
    of my spine

    even the walls cry out

    ….cause your beauty defies
    simple convention
    attention is necessary, since you supply
    oxygen-like assistance
    to breathing,
    leaving all who witness
    emphatically believing in
    angels, Heaven, the power of God,
    a mind-numbing creation
    sending elevated sensations
    as my eyes linger
    across curves, down scintillating thighs
    and arrive at the conclusion
    that you are
    either
    the most beautiful woman I’ve ever seen
    or simply
    my most perfect delusion
    of perfection

    even the walls cry out

    ….cause it’s so apparent
    all else becomes transparent
    when I’m lost in close embrace with you
    and desperately longing
    to taste of you---
    from your delectable spring
    which brings reality to my dreams
    as your flesh wraps around mind
    and I dive in your stream
    of bliss
    happily tongue-kissing
    various curves, ample enclosures,
    this is heavenly,
    and I begin to thank God for the exposure
    to your warmth
    your sweet wetness
    and the multitude of treats
    that leave me aching in pleasure
    as I edge close to release
    into rapture,
    you---capturing my attention with deep kisses
    me---longing to fulfill each of your sensual wishes
    our desires enrich the air
    in the form of thick, throaty moans
    even the walls cry out, in wonder,
    as our mouths and fingers naughtily roam
    into uncharted regions and unexplored coves
    satisfying our appetites,
    until, together, we explode
    in intimate appreciate
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!! even da wall cry out !
    when love is calling........nice vibe poet..
     
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    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wauw! this is beautifull!
     
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    Godfather Active Member MEMBER

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    Tarheel,
    this is simply outstanding. Grasped me from the beginnin till the explosion !!! Really loved it. Really.

    Thanx
    Godfather
     
  5. DigginThaShyne

    DigginThaShyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you both so much

    the love is appreciated and definitely reciprocated

    keep scribin'

    MJ
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    DA-YUM

    my goodness...this is spectacular...
     
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    Ladysoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My My My

    This piece is absolutely amazing! I enjoyed it so much that I read it twice. Keep up the good work!
     
  8. PoeticAlize

    PoeticAlize Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i loved this piece. you kno you got that good passionate love when even the walls wanna cry out. it was pure :hot: ness
     
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