Black Poetry : EVEN THE ODDS

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by karma55, May 17, 2007.

  1. karma55

    karma55 Active Member MEMBER

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    Aside from these other n*ggas
    You can read my brain
    Like he know this
    And he know that
    But you know everything
    How could I tell you everything?
    Thought we could make it through forever
    So I told you everything
    Didn’t think bout how you would handle my heart
    Now you got it in your hand
    And I’m afraid that you might tear it apart
    So let’s even the odds
    I refuse to be let in the dark
    Give me you
    From the start
    Even if it’s rude remarks
    I gotta know what I be facing
    This is love,
    Almost feel like I can taste it
    But if its not
    I guess I learn and have to find a replacement
    I can’t be waiting on you to make up your mind
    Boy, you just gotta make it
    You know you know how to get to me
    So you always try and fake it
    And now im thinking bout the choice I’m making
    And it’s making me feel like a fool
    Thought I was just letting
    You do you
    And I never got an attitude
    But now i'm doing what gotta do
    Even though I’m used to you
    If you don’t give me all of you
    Everything you like to do with me
    Will turn into what we used to do
    Cause the girl who made it easy for you
    Now is who i used to be
    So you better get used to me
    Unless you plan on loosing me
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    No one likes that fear of the unknown, will he embrace my heart, or break it. Well posed flow poetess.
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    karma55:
    Your drop is on point.
    I'm diggn' this deep.

    Much Luv
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow.....this was so on point here ya pen talking sweet and real
     
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