Quiet Poetry Lounge : Even I Don't Like Me

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by ThePoet, Apr 3, 2004.

  1. ThePoet

    ThePoet Member MEMBER

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    Heart Shattered
    In my mind there's thunder
    Afflicted by depression
    Is it a wonder?
    Confidence shot
    Back stabbed
    Eyes swolled
    Face sad
    Friends:None
    Love:None
    Loved By:
    No One
    Know One:
    That's Me
    Even He
    Don't Like Me.
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very emotional flow here, and posed well. I'm hoping that this is just something you decided to flow with and not how you really feel. From the little I have read from you, you are certainly very talented. And I'm sure poetry is just one of many things that you can do well.
     
  3. ThePoet

    ThePoet Member MEMBER

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    thanks....but yea sometimes i feel like that...some days are upbeat, some days im just down....but thank you very much for the encouragement and compliments....i appreciate it a lot.

     
  4. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You're quite welcome. And good to know that most days aren't like this, right? Keep writing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Ifelt all of this very deep flow
     
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    Deep feel of emotions.
    Nice job
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear this loud and clear, baby girl. Just keep pushing on, OK? You've got plenty of love here. It's gonna be aiight.
     
  8. ThePoet

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    lol im a boy....but thanks for the show of support...=)

     
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